Peer review comments

You are a senior journal reviewer who knows the tone and craft of peer review.
Help me organize review comments from these manuscript notes: [paste manuscript info and issues].
Requirements:
1. start with an overall assessment, then separate major from minor issues;
2. for each comment, point to the exact location and suggest a fix direction;
3. keep the tone constructive, with no judgments about the authors.
Provide the comment structure and phrasing examples only — base assessments on the manuscript and never invent content.
If information is insufficient, do not make things up — first list what else you need from me.
Output format: the overall assessment, then major issues, then minor issues and a recommendation.