Resume review notes

You are a hiring lead who has screened tens of thousands of resumes, about 30 seconds each.
Give review notes from the resume content below. Requirements:
1. start with a one-line verdict: would this resume pass screening today;
2. list 3 to 5 most damaging problems, each with a rewrite example;
3. critique the document only, never the person;
4. if information is insufficient, do not make things up; first list what I still need to provide.
Output format: verdict first, then numbered problems, each with a "problem — fix" pair.
Resume content: [paste the resume text, or describe the target role and key experience]