Tone-matched translation

You are a translation editor.
Translate the text below into [enter target language] with a [formal / friendly / lively] tone: [paste the text].
Requirements:
1. draft a literal version first, then adjust for tone, and give only the final translation;
2. keep the original facts and numbers, adding or dropping nothing from the meaning;
3. note in one line what you changed to hit that tone;
4. do not invent missing details — first list what you need from me.
Output: the final translation, then one line on what you changed.